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Lying in shadows cast by the moon
Reluctantly creeping back to my room
Waking to promises of the perfect day
"Just one more kiss" was all I could say
I lay there in silence, inhaling your scent
The landlords were coming, so away you went
Those days spent living a lucid dream
Launched my new life, how different it seemed
Lying in bed, wishing to stay
The plane ride home: I cried the whole way.
Your scent on my skin lingered a while
I spent that whole day forcing a smile
Sadness and joy made my tears flow
As I gazed at the ocean, so far below
Your endless blue eyes can take me away
In just a few years, forever we'll stay
Locked in perpetual love till the end
Till the laws of society finally bend
For now we're locked in our separate cells
Temporarily living our personal hells
As I lay here in silence, I remember your scent
Still here it lingers, long after I went.
I'll love you forever, and so it shall be.
And I'll remember your face till it's all that I see.
Reluctantly creeping back to my room
Waking to promises of the perfect day
"Just one more kiss" was all I could say
I lay there in silence, inhaling your scent
The landlords were coming, so away you went
Those days spent living a lucid dream
Launched my new life, how different it seemed
Lying in bed, wishing to stay
The plane ride home: I cried the whole way.
Your scent on my skin lingered a while
I spent that whole day forcing a smile
Sadness and joy made my tears flow
As I gazed at the ocean, so far below
Your endless blue eyes can take me away
In just a few years, forever we'll stay
Locked in perpetual love till the end
Till the laws of society finally bend
For now we're locked in our separate cells
Temporarily living our personal hells
As I lay here in silence, I remember your scent
Still here it lingers, long after I went.
I'll love you forever, and so it shall be.
And I'll remember your face till it's all that I see.
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What lingers:
Your scent
Your smile
Your voice
Your touch
Your love.
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Ohhhh Robyn's gone soft.
HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY GIBBS! its august 20th, you should all get him a present >.<
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Does it end too suddenly? Should I change the meter at the end to add more impact? hmmm? thanks people
Your scent
Your smile
Your voice
Your touch
Your love.
-----
Ohhhh Robyn's gone soft.
HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY GIBBS! its august 20th, you should all get him a present >.<
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Does it end too suddenly? Should I change the meter at the end to add more impact? hmmm? thanks people
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no ,i liek the ending. Think you should hkeep it as it is